G321 AS film openings evaluation

What went well:
It was really clever how they managed to film the girls going onto the bus and getting off the same bus.
The level of sound was really good.
The titles were really good.
Even better if:
The text on the mobile phone was easier to read, you have to tilt your head to clearly see it so it should be the other way up.
The camera was a little steadier.
Mark: 51/60

Elimination

What went well:
The acting was good.
There were some quirky, edgy camera shots.
Even better if:
The titles were really simple.
The background music was sometimes a little too loud when trying to hear what the actress was saying.
Mark: 44/60



What went well:
The camera shots were steady.
Even better if:
The story line was much more interesting.
The actors and actresses spoke louder and clearer.
There was more variety of camera shots.
Mark: 22/60


The disappearance:
What went well:
The voice over was really good.
The camera shots were steady.
Although the titles were simple, they were quite short and sweet e.g. effective.
The acting was really good.
Even better if:
The titles were more interesting.
There wasn't so much blackness at the end.
Mark: 52/60